Check out Musk Hires Pretty Good Writers by rogersgeorge. Here is an excerpt:
At least when I tracked down an example of bad writing in a technical article, I found that the writer at SpaceX got it right, and the writer of the technical article got it wrong!
Here’s what SpaceX says:
The competition will focus on a single criterion—maximum speed.
And here’s (blush)
The full article is available here.